Christmas Treasure

by BeautifulxMess   Dec 15, 2006


I want to embrace within your heart;
I want to abide there for always.
I never know where to start;
You always keep me in a daze.

It's the way you look in my eyes;
The love I'll always have to hold.
It's like snow falling from the skies;
A love story waiting to be told.

You're a Christmas memory to keep;
Like baby Jesus in a manger.
You're an ornament aloft on a tree;
You're my immunity against danger

You lead my way through the dark;
Like Christmas lights all around.
With you Christmas won't fall apart;
Our love glazes like frost on the ground.

Sweetheart, you keep me together;
You help me though my pain.
Your remedy that makes me better;
You cure me like a cleansing rain.

As day sinks into the water's soul;
You hold me as the night awakes.
Smiles around the town beholds;
You're the holiday that I appreciate.

If the presents never appear;
If the snow never seeks to fall.
As long as you never disappear;
As long as you're here for it all.

Christmas wouldn't be complete;
The lights would fade into dark.
None of the presents matter to me;
As long as you're in my heart.

You're what I call my treasure;
My ultimate golden chest.
Your love is what I endeavor;
You're my last Christmas request.

**Sorry if the endings a little rocky but I mean it's a little forceful.
Other then that I hope y'all like it.
If you can please give me some idea's about the ending and help me out if something needs fixing.
Thanks

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  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Whoa! poem poem poem. just so much emotion and description.

    bravo! 5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Shae

    Amazing poem!! I really liked this one too! Its really hard to pick a part to say is the 'best' cause its all great!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, another amazing write. I really liked it. I have to agree with Goran, seems you have a lot of memories of Christmas. Great Job overall.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really enjoyed reading your poem! I think it was perfect just like it is!

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Personally, I think that the ending was fine and I didn't find any rocky parts to it.
    I can tell that Christmas brings a lot of emotions to you.
    You had a great flow and wonderful vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie