by BeautifulxMess Jun 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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So the story begins once upon a time, |
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Very nice write. Good flow, the concept was good, and the word choice was decent. One thing I have to say is, don't try so hard. This poem felt a little forced. |
by BooBear
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Wow this poem is beautiful. |
by NinjaGirl
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A simply stunning piece of poetry. beautiful words, but painful meaning at the same time. i really adored this piece, it moved me |
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What a nice ending... my God, its 5/5!! |
by TheRapture03
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Great ending. it flowed so well. 5/5 |