Comments : What is a friend?

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridget

    Woow that definitely is what a true friend is good work

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Good view of a friend 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is one of those poems you want to copy and hang on your fridge. Lovely seniments. Excellent writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Another great write! I really enjoyed this and the neat way you worded things.
    Someone who can lend their heart, to give you strength when your apart

    I thought this was an interesting take on your heart. Not imagery I've heard before, so I enjoyed it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chyrelle

    This is great and i am blessed to have such friends

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryan

    Im not a biggie for frienship poems, but this one is very good, 1st sentence put a space between (no one), 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww what a sweet poem, I loved it. "Someone who can lend their voice, when you find it hard to speak." That was my favorite line. This poem was very well written and flowed beautifully, the structure and flow were flawless. I did however find a mistake:

    Someone who can lend their heart, to give you strength when your apart.

    Instead of "your" I believe it should be "you're"

    Great work, i loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is sucha nice poem... i love how in the end you made it that freinds are the reason for people succeding.. and its just a reallyt cute message and great poem..

  • 11 years ago

    by Ninaa

    Ok i love this is awesome...u can tell that this is for some one very special b'cuz like the emotion and love you put in to it5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is extremely sweet. Friends are angels without wings. :) I'm returning the favor of course... Thank you for the comment. Your poem was simply beautiful. I really enjoyed this part:

    Someone who will give you sun, when you're followed by a cloud.

    It was my favorite part because I kinda thought it was catchy and that it was a unique way of saying how a friend will bring you up when your feeling down. :) I liked how you added a little rhyming in there it helped the flow a lot.

    Excellent Write


  • 8 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Very well stated!! If you have a person that is a true friend in your life, you are truely blessed. True friendships are very rare these days. Hopfully one day I will have that again!