Wow... it's a funny poem sure and it made me giggle in places but it also gave me a sense of understanding of how much work goes into the hospital place and how today, on christmas day, we still have doctors and nurses working against the clock..
Wonderful poem rachel..
Great poem! Haha! Wow! You might find it kinda weird but this poem inspired me. I always found nursing very interesting though I don't know if I'm cut out for it. Anyway, I loved this poem. Funny indeed! The rhythm was great! Very well-written!
You have a talent for devising clever rhymes. This poem was funny (as it was meant to be,) especially the last part of it. I like to see a person that writes in various styles, and you certainly do. Keep up the good work. (5/5)
Haha, oh I love this poem. I am an assistant horse vet., and I recognize many of the medications you mentioned. Strange how horses and humans are treated with such similar drugs. I also used to take Zoloft for depression. Anyway, wonderful poem. Very well written, touching...sad but uplifting and mildly funny. The type of poem to bring tears to eyes, and smiles to lips. Very detailed, and the ending made me laugh. 5/5
lol.. cute poem.. the flow is great .. it was a little hard to read just because some of the words were soo big..but all in all the poem was a nice piece of work.. only in this line the rhyme seemed a little forced to me"Amphojel for indigestion, tissues for their noses,
Foley catheter insertions, some as large as hoses."
AH HA! I just figured out why your work/name/style look so familiar. Lol your in my favorites :)
Wow what a nifty little poem! My grandmas a nurse. :) I think its cool... though I couldn't do it.. blood .. ick... I'm glad you like your job. I never thought to see a poem on it but you did amazing. Your rhyming was perfect nothing forced. Your vocab was huge... some I didn't understand. and your wisedom ... well its still there ;) Great Job!