Comments : What I do at work

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent poem! You impress me more each time I read one! You are very good at humor.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Fantastic!!! Your best one yet!!!! I love it. 500/5! I love the hospital humor!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow... it's a funny poem sure and it made me giggle in places but it also gave me a sense of understanding of how much work goes into the hospital place and how today, on christmas day, we still have doctors and nurses working against the clock..
    Wonderful poem rachel..

  • 11 years ago

    by ALEX

    Cool. Different. Very descriptive. I love the idea. 5/5!


  • 11 years ago

    by Rona

    Great poem! Haha! Wow! You might find it kinda weird but this poem inspired me. I always found nursing very interesting though I don't know if I'm cut out for it. Anyway, I loved this poem. Funny indeed! The rhythm was great! Very well-written!

  • 11 years ago

    by Barry

    Nothing Much???

    beautiful.... Angel of Mercy.

  • 11 years ago

    by Minkus

    You have a talent for devising clever rhymes. This poem was funny (as it was meant to be,) especially the last part of it. I like to see a person that writes in various styles, and you certainly do. Keep up the good work. (5/5)

  • 11 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Haha, oh I love this poem. I am an assistant horse vet., and I recognize many of the medications you mentioned. Strange how horses and humans are treated with such similar drugs. I also used to take Zoloft for depression. Anyway, wonderful poem. Very well written, touching...sad but uplifting and mildly funny. The type of poem to bring tears to eyes, and smiles to lips. Very detailed, and the ending made me laugh. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow this was good i liked it do my friends so excellent work once again

  • 11 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 6

    lol.. cute poem.. the flow is great .. it was a little hard to read just because some of the words were soo big..but all in all the poem was a nice piece of work.. only in this line the rhyme seemed a little forced to me"Amphojel for indigestion, tissues for their noses,
    Foley catheter insertions, some as large as hoses."

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice poem, good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Wow u sound like a super hero!

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    AH HA! I just figured out why your work/name/style look so familiar. Lol your in my favorites :)

    Wow what a nifty little poem! My grandmas a nurse. :) I think its cool... though I couldn't do it.. blood .. ick... I'm glad you like your job. I never thought to see a poem on it but you did amazing. Your rhyming was perfect nothing forced. Your vocab was huge... some I didn't understand. and your wisedom ... well its still there ;) Great Job!

    5/5 Loved that last part.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mr M

    So mother was a nurse all of her life

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    Well I know where to come to when this diabetes gets the best of me.Ship me out to Rachel! Loved it.Your style of writing is great,relaxed and easy to get into.humorous ,an outstanding read!

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    The best way to live, is to give. The best to give is attention. Within attention Life consists.