I like it, not necessarily my taste but a good poem none the less. I think you captured this beautifully nice work
4/5

I liked the flow just didnt conect it was good 4/5

Love it. it does make you feel kinda lonely middle of the night creepy feelin! haha. i loved it tho. great vocabulary and use of it! (that's MY great vocab rite there..haha) <3

Awesome,Awesome,Awesome! I wouldin't change anything bout this poem, this is what I was looking for to read! great job, really loved it, adding this poem to my favs.

the flow was amazing, as well as the unique way you used your words. Very well put together not unorginized, structured very well

5/5

I love this poem =p

It's long, complicated, arcane...I love it!

Im glad you submitted it luved it--very sreative

I was so engaged through this poem
the entire thing was a great read.
Love your style.
Its nothing like most of the stuff I read.
Its so different and unique.
Your use of words were amazing,
I love the images that your words portrayed.
This was truly an amazing and powerful write!!!
Great job!!

You are an amazing talented poet.
This poem just made me want to keep reading.
5/5
Good job!