Comments : Intoxicated Whispers

  • 10 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Hey i liked it a lot! lol it was very nice. you have a mind anda heart of a true poet, keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Haha, this was a funny poem n did deserve to go in this section! made me laugh out loud

  • 10 years ago

    by Leanne

    Oh i loved this poem, reminded me of a few nights out i've had lmao
    Great flow to it and the rhyming was great! Keep it up gem i'm loving your work :]
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    LMAO! That is soo funny Gem! That's good, I needed a little humor! I loved this poem! Sooooo good! SO FUNNY!
    xoxo

    P.S. I'd love to hear the break up poems. Thanks!

  • 10 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ It could've gone in sad poems, but I think you did the right thing, cuz I thought it was funny. Another good one from you +.+

  • 10 years ago

    by megann anne

    Haha i really liked it! it was funny, haha i hate it when boys are like that... haha good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem, Very funny. I loved the back and forth responses. Excellent! Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Lol good job

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa Brooks

    Sounds like some of my nights at the bar.

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Hey, i love this! A lot of perople can easily relate!

  • 10 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow SO POWERFULL loved it all esp. the ending.wowur so talentd.

    keep it up

    lis

  • 10 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    One of ur best..wow

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #6:

    Yeah...kinda hard to choose a category...if only they had one for girl power! Lol! You did really good and it was very easy to follow...great job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Aw Gem i love your work, your such a talented writer, i could almost relate to this but i really don't remember what happened that night :)
    xx court

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. all your poems have really amazing flow.. cute poem.. not my fav but its still good

  • 10 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Thats cute

  • 10 years ago

    by Jen

    IT WAS FUNNY AND TRUE I KNOW WHAT BEER AND WEED DOES TO A PERSON, IT'S FUNNY TO WATCH DRUNK AND HIGH PEOPLE! I LOVED THE POEM!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ellie

    Lol, nice!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hehe this is so cool i love it

  • 10 years ago

    by Ally

    YEPP im pretty sure that was the best i've seen in a long time

    -and mind you it was pretty funny as well. GOOD JOB