Comments : Hostage

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. spectacular poem.. amazing imagery and great flow .. i really enjoyed reading this poem.. great worK!! and theres no other poems you need to comment.. but thanks ! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was very very very sad... It just amazes me how people can treat other people like dirt and not care about it really.. I liked how you put this poem through the victim's POV it made it very heartbreaking to read, just knowing that by the time the cops got there there would be nothing left for them to do. The beginngin of the poem was kind of weak but the rest was very powerful so it made up for it. Nice write and thanx for sharing it with us all.

  • 10 years ago

    by LostANDConfused

    Amazing poem...so good and you are really talented.

  • 10 years ago

    by Leanne

    That poem was brilliant!!!
    And to say you had no idea where it was going too.
    1/5
    No i'm kidding 5/5 =D

  • 10 years ago

    by Never URs

    I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Anime Lover

    Dude this is a sad yet very interesting poem. It really keeps you wanting to read more =) Keep on writing!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow!! this poem is really deep. I got chills when I read it. Good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by tlangelani

    Well written poem, loved the way it flowed... KEEP IT UP, U WRITE BEAUTIFULLY!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dr of Bishonomics

    Well deep man i really liked that

  • 10 years ago

    by Dr of Bishonomics

    Well deep man i really liked that

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    Very interesting read. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Pretty deep. I'm sorry if this is true. Great, great poem. Relates so much to what I read in my suspense novels. Awesome job. 5/5

    D_P

  • I like it
    deep
    great flow
    yeppers

    much emo over

  • 10 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I enjoyed this. thanks for the comments on my stuff xD
    this was intensely descriptive I almost felt as if I was dying!

    great
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    I really like this poem.... your really talented!!! i like all of your stuf... i am definatly adding you to my favourites =D

  • 10 years ago

    by Katelyn

    WOW, that was amazing. It really makes you think about life. It made me think about the things i can loose. I like the beginning most.

  • 10 years ago

    by Joe

    That was really good

  • 10 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow! dat waz...touchin! i luved it! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Nice write.

  • 10 years ago

    by AwakeInDreamin

    Sad yet interesting i loved it you are such a talented writer i really liked the imagery