Wow this was very very very sad... It just amazes me how people can treat other people like dirt and not care about it really.. I liked how you put this poem through the victim's POV it made it very heartbreaking to read, just knowing that by the time the cops got there there would be nothing left for them to do. The beginngin of the poem was kind of weak but the rest was very powerful so it made up for it. Nice write and thanx for sharing it with us all.