Very nice 5/5

This is a really good poem!

Good job!

Gaaah!! Yeah, that's right, two exclamation marks. This poem deserves more though.
It was spectacular. So descriptive, so well flowed, and just over all well written.
You are a powerful, and fantasticly 'dark' poet.
Good job.

Wow, truly dark poem there... Nicely done, great imagery.

Omg! i luv it! its kinda inspirational too. well done 5/5

' Crabs and Crumpets '

i love this ... good work ... it reminds me of some of mine and i enjoy sooo much reading poetry like this ... i really like this stanza

Tears escape my eyes
Hiccups escape my throat
Everything seems distorted
I think I'm about to choke.

Crabs and crumpets this poem was awesome reminds me of a movie scene or part of it does, I pictured a women in the woods by a river I have seen this same type of scene in movies before. You got great imagery. Keep writting hun.

Very nice love it! 5/5! =)

Wow, very sad, and emotional peice. I liked it. The flow as well as the structure were both good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Wow this is again I really like how you started out opening just made me get goosbumps nice job
*kaila*

I love your poem.its so REAL

Nice one I could envision the poem in my head, althought it was more like a story it had a ryme that signifies death

You are truly talented, i've read most of your poems keep writning more

I really love this poem

Wow, awesome, 5/5