Comments : Lost In Reverie [Acrostic]

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought that this poem was amazing, the flow and the word choice were wonderful in this piece. I sometimes find myself caught in the middle of reality and fantasy. Excellent poem 5/5 GG23

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is very strong poem with lexical quality and poetic quality in it. Very well written with nice vocabulary and meanings. Keep up the good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    This was a well written acrostic! It's always hard to rhyme them, but you did a great job with the rhyme scheme. =] Keep it up!

    x0x Ciao

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    An impressive piece you have written here to tell you the truth I was quite stunned while reading this. The word choice was perfect written with such depth and the meaning portrayed behind this poem was outstanding. Amazing vocab. Well done on this I truely have enjoyed reading your poetry.~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    *clap clap*

    This was amazing m'dear, I find it hard to write acrostic poems and I have to admit this was one of the most beautiful acrostic poems I have ever read. good job.


  • 11 years ago

    by shade127

    Antoher beautifully written piece. I like the style you used, I will need to try it in my next poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another good poem from you..and you really have a way with words...

    but if you didnt say what reverie meant i wouldnt have known

    nicely done...again no need for improving this one either.5/5 keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Absolutely beautiful. Your vocab usage and flow were wonderful.

    "Reality has become undone
    Entwined with hope and wishes
    Vendetta between right and wrong
    Ends with hugs and kisses"

    ^ Those were my favourite lines. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Freedom

    5/5 and its for sure going to my favourite poems.short poem,but the emotions lies deeply,words are not common