I think this is a very good poem becca, maybe the last sentence could be changed, but this is still a perfect 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I thought this was a great poem it had a lot of emotion to it it was wonderful keep it up 5/5

Wow. This was so beautiful. I loved it. It was sad.. but very beautifully penned. It flowed really well & I loved the wording!

My fav stanza:

But seeing you is hard to take
Unbearable, so hard to do
When I just want to hold your hand,
To hug, to hold and to kiss you

^^ I loved it. It was so beautiful!

Great job. Keep it up.

Bri x

WONDERFULLY BEAUTIFUL. It was lovely. my favourite part is:
"But seeing you is hard to take
Unbearable, so hard to do
When I just want to hold your hand,
To hug, to hold and to kiss you"

IT WAS LOVELY.

Kalee

I enjoyed this poem. I think I've read it before, but nonetheless, it was a joy to read it once again. great job, your descriptions were great and the theme was good too. 5/5

Awh i love this one! it kinda reminds me of someone. you are an amazing writer! never stop writing!

I felt like i could really relate to this poem, you portrayed your yearning so very well hun. i wouldnt change a thing.
much love and many kisses,
bex

Great emotion!

~shanny~

I love the repitition of the "But" in the last 4 stanza's which shows you have a knack in alliterative usage.

Good poem in terms of usage, content and grammer.

You have a nice flow and a good message. I think you got it out nicely, while not over-exagerating anything.

Aww wow this is really good. i defiantly enjoyed reading this poem very much. it flowed so nicely. you did a wonderful job on it. 5/5

~Kristina

"But once again, I can forget"

Is this supposed to be But once again, I can't forget?? If not then sorry lol. Anyways great way to express your feelings for the one you love. Great flow and rhythm. 5/5

"But really only time can tell
If this was meant to be
The only thing that we can do
Is wait it out and see"

I like those lines alot^. This poem is really good. alot of emotion. the flow was really nice. Well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

I liked this poem, not as well as the others. It seems a bit cliche, but with your style. If that makes sense, eh.

"But seeing you is hard to take
Unbearable, so hard to do"
^ That says almost the same thing in both lines... I think if you changed the word "hard" to something that means the same thing as unbearable, than it would make better sense.

I loved the last two stanzas.
It brought the entire poem together, and the last stanza was amazing. I absolutely loved it. :D

Keep it up
<3 Teria.

I loved this poem a lot..
im going through a long distance and this is how it truly is..
Ty for sharing this writing. I love it.