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by N J Thornton Feb 15, 2007
Life, society /
Bluestocking Dic kinson -
a prattler, and lewd like a
Yet, the deathwatch beetle,
and time - the bone of my contention.
And dewy eyes of a dunderhead,
reveal the wanton breadth,
of my awry tete-a-tete.
But, Maiden's poesies are curt,
like the damask rose bush.
Is that a blush you bring to my cheek? I enjoy what the fact you create more than just an image, you create an atmosphere here.
Not your best poem, but still great. It seems a little bit more forced.
Still, you have a great vocabulary.
What can I say? Amazing. Can see you took a lot of thought into this one OR you just a natural... Wish mines was good as yours :) 6/5
by GIRL IN LOVE
I really didn't like this poem. i don't even undersatnd it
Well, this is a very complex but perfectly worded poem, love the complexity of the word choice, i give it a 5/5!!!