That is a great poem, as everybody asks them question, i have so mant times n still do about the same person its been two years and i still ask them. you are a very talented writter, and have great potential as a writter. if you would will u read a one of mine n comment plz xxtake carexx
I love you poem deep thought and everything you said was true. I love your writing it seems as if u put a lot of thouht into it ....your words make me wonder about the love I had for someone that never fades away...why? I don't know
This was amazing. great flow and the message is clear and understandable. it can be related to easily. i love to structure. it was a good way to modernize the ever famous "heartbroken" poem.
love ya lots,