How did I end up here?

by Beauty In The Breaking   Feb 21, 2007


How did I end up here?
I used to be such a happy child,
but the older I got,
the more pain there seemed to be in the world.

How did I end up here?
Sweet sixteen they say
My foot I say!
The year I turned sixteen
my world fell apart at the seams.

How did I end up here?
Depression and a endless desire to die,
broken hearts, broken dreams,
lost friends, lost relationships,
finding myself all alone
in a very cruel world.

How did I end up here?
Holding on to anything,
fighting for my very life.
Looking for anything
that means I'm not alone.

How did I end up here?
Eating disorders, wild mood swings,
the lows get lower
and the highs get farther between,
Oh, the joys of being a teen.

How did I end up here?
Is there anyone out there
who can save me from myself?
Is there anyone out there
who can love me
and teach me to love myself?

How did I end up here?
I'm just a lost teen
fighting for life
and trying to find her place
in a cruel world where no one sees
the pain of a lost soul
and no one can seem to hear
my desperate screams for help.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Your poem will reach many, letting them know that they "aren't alone"!

    Nicely done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    5 out of 5 and I've finally got done rating and commenting all your poems. I've been on a roll tonight, but anyway's keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your poems soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This was ok. Every teen goes through this, so it seemed a lot like a teen rant. I wouldn't be suprised if you get many comments about how people can relate to this (especially girls) as it's a common issue. I know I went/ am going through the same thing.
    To compliment the common subject it would have been nice to see some new language, something more "poetic" maybe.
    I think you have a few typos aswell.
    On the fifth line of the fourth stanza it should be "you're."
    Also, on seventh line of the final stanza you have "can seems" so either "can seem" or "seems" would work there.
    Ok thanks for sharing.