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Wow great job! i really like it a lot. it flowed so nicely. And i really like what you wrote about! 5/5
by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX
Aww.how sweet...i loved it...5/5
by Cella Bella
Aw this was a beautiful little poem! I like the whole idea of "lighting the wick again", It's really cute lol. Nice flow too. 5/5
You said it all, short, but sweet and straight to the point. well done hun
much love and many kisses,
Stephen, I am always blown away by the fact that you are only 16 and yet you're writing things like this - its amazing. Hope you're getting an A++++++ in English!!! :) Good job. I enjoyed it.
Woah this was wonderful nice job!!
by Brittney Follett
Yes very sweet and it created a great image in my head. Though I think you should acutally set up some stanza and put in some grammer:
That ebbs and flows just like the sea
Making me remember that
The two of us were meant to be
Filling through the atmosphere
With light that flickers -- dim...
Searching for a match
So I can light the wick again...
Ta da! if you don't capitalize and puncuate or whatever it makes your work look sloppy and it seems as if you just threw it together in a few seconds. Make it look as good as it sounds.
Great rhyming and flow.
Aww that was soo sweetand cute..lol very well written..short but fulfilling. keep it up! x
by Rachel RTVW
To be so young you sure are talented. I love this cute little poem. Although short, it got the point across. It flowed well and the structure and word choice were good. Excellent job on this!
by John Long
Enjoyed the imagery of the first two lines and the double meaning of "Searching for a match" which is quite imaginative. Well written.
by I Love You
This is a very good poem