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These were my favorite lines:

So why begin
What you cant end

and

So on this night
I lie awake
I see clearly now
I am a fake

Those are awesome lines.. they just flow so well.. I love this poem.. it's wonderful. Emotional.. and rythmic.. great job!!!! 5/5 as always my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Awww that is so heartfelt and deep!! i loved the scond last stanza, it reali put a meaning to the poem!! great work and great poem, 5/5 from me!!

xoxo Lucy

Wow, short lines but it was very powerful! i can relate to this. sad, but brilliant poem! 5/5

~Kristina

A very somber poems. well written though! i lkie it a lot!!
5/5

I can kinda relate to this poem. it's well written and i give it 5/5.