Wow.. great poem.. wonderfully written!! The rhyming was excellent!! Way to go!! The flow was wonderful as well, along with the fact that it had a very true message in the poem! Awesome poem!! 5/5
I looooove this!
Oh, this has to be one of my favourites of your's.
The first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better!
The flow was flawless, the imagery amazing.
Wonderful work, as always.
I really love your writing and everything is so relatable. Excellent job once again. I really enjoy reading your stuff. Each stanza here is very powerful anf strong. You certainly know what you are doing. Great job. =]
Amazing poem, the words were heartfelt with so much emotion portrayed in each one. The flow flawless i didnt seem to catch it go off at all. I found this poem to be quite sweet and touching. Good work on a nicely written love poem~mel
Again you leave me standing in awe, your word are well chosen as always, and the vocab is of course the best. The emtion is deep, and it is perfectly written. I love your work. It has took me sometime to return your comments on my thread, but I got to it. thanks for being patient, and please keep writting, your words speak to my soul.