Comments : The Edge of Eternity

  • 10 years ago

    by L a u r e n

    One word, wow.
    Your a very talented writer.
    I'm speechless.
    -Lauren

  • 10 years ago

    by Bianca

    OMG I REALLY LIKE IT!!! YOU DID A GOOD JOB ON IT.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by beav

    Nice. it has a simplistic quality. but at the same time it holds so much truth. it's a universal understanding. i hope this makes sense!! :) superb writing (no surprise!). 5 for you. -beav

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    "To hear somebody say "I love you",
    Could be the greatest feeling ever known,
    But if those words turnout untrue,
    Soon enough you'll be all alone."
    ___

    Those lines got to me. Truly an amazing write. I love every bit of it. Esp. the last stanza. Nicely penned. Never stop writing!

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw, this is a beautiful poem. It's so very true... the flow was amazing as well. Great write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow.. great poem.. wonderfully written!! The rhyming was excellent!! Way to go!! The flow was wonderful as well, along with the fact that it had a very true message in the poem! Awesome poem!! 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Aw so wseet so touching and heart aching,i liked especially those

    To hear somebody say "I love you",
    Could be the greatest feeling ever known,
    But if those words turnout untrue,
    Soon enough you'll be all alone.

    Keep it up
    See ya
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    The rhyming in this poem is very free-sounding. Not forced in the slightest.
    The flow is a bit off, but the meaning is definite and clear.

    Great poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I looooove this!
    Oh, this has to be one of my favourites of your's.
    The first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better!
    The flow was flawless, the imagery amazing.
    Wonderful work, as always.

  • 10 years ago

    by Disturbed and Under Age

    A poem of truest excellence. Well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That really was a beautiful poem. And as the others are saying, the flow was just great.
    Excellent.

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very beautiful! You spoke the truth about love and a first time love. Keep up the awesome work! Check out the poem Friendship Ring please.
    God bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This was a very good write. The first of yours that I have read. The rhythmn of the words just kind of spilt off my lips.

    Great job, Will now go and check out some more of yours.

    Thanks for sharing,
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful job on your poem. Great rhyme and flow.

    Still it never crosses our mind,
    When it's all said and done we'll see,
    That it's harder then it looks to find,
    The edge of eternity.

    How hard true love is to find. But when we do it lasts through eternity.
    Excellent!
    Take care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by carla

    A really heart throbbing poem it was absoloutley beautiful-5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!!....nice!...it rhymed perfectly n the poem flowed great....excellent job...n it's soo true..lovely work!.........i just loved this 1...Great write!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I really love your writing and everything is so relatable. Excellent job once again. I really enjoy reading your stuff. Each stanza here is very powerful anf strong. You certainly know what you are doing. Great job. =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Amazing poem, the words were heartfelt with so much emotion portrayed in each one. The flow flawless i didnt seem to catch it go off at all. I found this poem to be quite sweet and touching. Good work on a nicely written love poem~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Nicely written poem. i like how you took such a topic and wrote it in a better way. its just not as cliche as it couldve been, and thats good. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again you leave me standing in awe, your word are well chosen as always, and the vocab is of course the best. The emtion is deep, and it is perfectly written. I love your work. It has took me sometime to return your comments on my thread, but I got to it. thanks for being patient, and please keep writting, your words speak to my soul.