This is so true .
& many can relate . I just love it .

Fights made; You took my chocolate chip cookie

That made me smilee (:
This poem is really easy to relate to . I think the flow was okay . Not great but not bad . But other than that, just perfect [;
..__MiNDYY

This is really sad but it is all true but yea good work and keep it up

Oh wow. that was so touching and sad. You did not leave me guessing on anything, simply amazing. You have such a talent, really! This really touched me because I had a best friend & we are no longer. wow! 5/5

Awww this is really good, so true.

i love the way you've done it aswell... kinda with the statements and the the explanations! very well done! xxxx 5/5

Amazing job! 5/5

So true...but sometimes, that pinkie ring just sticks to your finger, and you dont want to pull it off, no matter how much it hurts.

5/5 great poem

You've talked about all the things that make and break a friendship and the structure was amazing
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

AWE. This was just so sad. but so cute. It really put a huge smile on my face. 'Specially this part:

Fights made; You took my chocolate chip cookie
^ ahahaha. That is just so adorable.

I loved the structure of this. It flowed really well & the rhymes were great.. didn't seem forced at all. I can't even begin to explain how much I loved this.. It's just.. so true. & a lot of people can relate to it. I also loved how you put a word.. and then described it. Seperating them by a semi colon [;]. It really brought out the poem for me. :]

Amazingly beautifully penned, hunny.

Bri [x]

Omgg, that is sooo sadd. This poem had pretty good flow although there were a few spots where i felt the rhymes did not work as well as they could have. The descriptions were brilliant and i loved your use of vocabulary, this was very sad but you told the story well. Nicely done hunni 5/5

Very beautiful! I loved it. 5/5
That's true.. Friends can't last forever I guess.. Well about me.. I'm 13.. I've had many best friends, and we all have said that hey let's stay as friends forever, but naah.. x) Well.. It's just the way it is..

Take care...

Good poem i liked it. But in the beginning of each line in each stanza is a little weird, but dont get me wrong its still good i liked it... keep i up

I really liked reading your poem. I can see the talent that you have by simply reading your poem. It seemed to me as a honest appraisal and that to me is what makes it so good. I am glad you commented on my poem as that is how I can get to know other poets here.

Very nice. I like poetry that shows a progression of time, and this does that wonderfully.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Aw.. nice write, I liked reading this poem, you're a great writer! Even though I'm sad t sat :P that is true, already for me :( Well great poem! 5/5!

Naww this was a really nice poem it was a little confusing but in the end i understood it completely and its so true everything about it!!! it really made me think and feel the words
great poem like all your others!!
5/5
luv fallen xx

I really enjoyed that, it was a joy to read, great work
5/5
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Thats so sad...thats certainly true about some people, but think some people are good for it