WOW David this is a beautiful poem. I really hope she appreciates how much of a nice guy you are and how much you love her. GREAT POEM. my favourite part is "And know that if you should ever fall, In my arms you'll be caught" this is a really sweet poem. 5/5. id give u more if i could.

Kalee

Aww i love this poem! so beautiful, heaps well written too. keep it up, love ur work =]
xx

This poem is so beautiful, and so sweet. This girl is very lucky to have you. Very well written, expressing your love for her so well. Great work. =] 5/5

Tammie

I love this poem!
Your feelings for this girl are so clearly.
A lucky girl.
"You and me forever and always" so sweet but it's interrupting the flow. Maybe if it stands after "In my arms you'll be caught" it is better?.. It's an idea, I really like the poem anyway!
Keep it up!

''My love for you is absolute, always true.
I love your eyes, your smile... yes all of you.
I need your love, I want you near.
My loyalty is forever, never fear. ''

I love that stanza.
This was so beautifully written, the flow was perfect, the first stanza had me hooked and the last stanza was such a perfect ending.
You did a great job with this.

This is so sweet, and it flows perfectly together, so beautiful....it was amazing
:)5/5
luv gabriella

Ooooooooooooh thats so sweet!!! thats so adorable! lovely! just absolutely lovely! great work! this one of my favs from you! good work! another 5/5 haha

xoxo Lucy

Awww this is the cutest thing David...I loved it! this is adorable nice poem

Well put and beautiful at that! 5/5

This is soo sweet! I wish I had someone who could write a poem like this to me! hehe. anyway, everything about this poem is wonderful, keep up the great work david! 5/5

My love for you is absolute, always true.
I love your eyes, your smile... yes all of you.
I need your love, I want you near.
My loyalty is forever, never fear

That was really nice wording.
Love is a beautiful thing.

AwWwW! that was sooooo sweet david! wow. u seem like a very romantic guy and ur love should really see the poems u right for her if she hasnt already. very sweet i loved it. ;) keeeeeeep it up

That is really sweet she is real lucky to have you

- Jamie

I just want to say your poem is so sweet i would love my fella to write something like that about me
love your work

It is always a nice feeling to find that love and always want them near. I hope that you find many blessings and true happiness with love. God bless and take care my friend.

--Sher

That was a really sweet poem. i loved it. keep up the good work!

David,

This is such a sweet and tender love poem...
T. is a very lucky girl..I hope she knows that!

Love,

Ingrid 5/5

Very very beautiful and pure. if a guy wrote something like that for me, i think i would fall instantly in love with them. whoever she is is very lucky to have you!

Excellent poem. Shows your true feeling in an enlightening way.

Wow!! this was one of the most beautiful things ive ever laid eyes on. it was wonderful in every way. a wonderful dedication.

Your grace so pure, your soul so sweet;
My heart longs for its steady beat.
A smile, a wave; Im completely taken,
My core is left greatly shaken.

that was my favorite stanza. it held alot of meaning. and the last 2 lines also, they were lovely.
job well done.
5/5.

-Ashlei.