WOW David this is a beautiful poem. I really hope she appreciates how much of a nice guy you are and how much you love her. GREAT POEM. my favourite part is "And know that if you should ever fall, In my arms you'll be caught" this is a really sweet poem. 5/5. id give u more if i could.
I love this poem!
Your feelings for this girl are so clearly.
A lucky girl.
"You and me forever and always" so sweet but it's interrupting the flow. Maybe if it stands after "In my arms you'll be caught" it is better?.. It's an idea, I really like the poem anyway!
Keep it up!