Comments : To my love

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    WOW David this is a beautiful poem. I really hope she appreciates how much of a nice guy you are and how much you love her. GREAT POEM. my favourite part is "And know that if you should ever fall, In my arms you'll be caught" this is a really sweet poem. 5/5. id give u more if i could.

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww i love this poem! so beautiful, heaps well written too. keep it up, love ur work =]
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    This poem is so beautiful, and so sweet. This girl is very lucky to have you. Very well written, expressing your love for her so well. Great work. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    I love this poem!
    Your feelings for this girl are so clearly.
    A lucky girl.
    "You and me forever and always" so sweet but it's interrupting the flow. Maybe if it stands after "In my arms you'll be caught" it is better?.. It's an idea, I really like the poem anyway!
    Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''My love for you is absolute, always true.
    I love your eyes, your smile... yes all of you.
    I need your love, I want you near.
    My loyalty is forever, never fear. ''

    I love that stanza.
    This was so beautifully written, the flow was perfect, the first stanza had me hooked and the last stanza was such a perfect ending.
    You did a great job with this.

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sweet, and it flows perfectly together, so beautiful....it was amazing
    :)5/5
    luv gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Ooooooooooooh thats so sweet!!! thats so adorable! lovely! just absolutely lovely! great work! this one of my favs from you! good work! another 5/5 haha

    xoxo Lucy

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this is the cutest thing David...I loved it! this is adorable nice poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Well put and beautiful at that! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is soo sweet! I wish I had someone who could write a poem like this to me! hehe. anyway, everything about this poem is wonderful, keep up the great work david! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    My love for you is absolute, always true.
    I love your eyes, your smile... yes all of you.
    I need your love, I want you near.
    My loyalty is forever, never fear

    That was really nice wording.
    Love is a beautiful thing.

  • 10 years ago

    by heather

    AwWwW! that was sooooo sweet david! wow. u seem like a very romantic guy and ur love should really see the poems u right for her if she hasnt already. very sweet i loved it. ;) keeeeeeep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    That is really sweet she is real lucky to have you

    - Jamie

  • 10 years ago

    by amanda flood

    I just want to say your poem is so sweet i would love my fella to write something like that about me
    love your work

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    It is always a nice feeling to find that love and always want them near. I hope that you find many blessings and true happiness with love. God bless and take care my friend.

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by CrazyNlove

    That was a really sweet poem. i loved it. keep up the good work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    David,

    This is such a sweet and tender love poem...
    T. is a very lucky girl..I hope she knows that!

    Love,

    Ingrid 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    Very very beautiful and pure. if a guy wrote something like that for me, i think i would fall instantly in love with them. whoever she is is very lucky to have you!

  • 9 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    Excellent poem. Shows your true feeling in an enlightening way.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Wow!! this was one of the most beautiful things ive ever laid eyes on. it was wonderful in every way. a wonderful dedication.

    Your grace so pure, your soul so sweet;
    My heart longs for its steady beat.
    A smile, a wave; Im completely taken,
    My core is left greatly shaken.

    that was my favorite stanza. it held alot of meaning. and the last 2 lines also, they were lovely.
    job well done.
    5/5.

    -Ashlei.