"A burning passion for you I still feel,
I am not quite ready to let you go."

I love the poem. the only thing worng are a couple tense problems. Check the word gave. the tense isnt correct, and sounds odd.

5/5.

Whoa. i loved this poem. the love in it too is so lovely. but sadness is there too. perfect poem netherless!

5/5 David

This poem flowed really well. I liked the rhymes too. There's a lot of emotion running through it. Powerful write! 5/5

marcella

Awe. What a great poem! It 's really sad, but beautifully written. It has a lot of emotion & sadness behind it.

it aches to bad. [ 'to' should be 'too' ].

Wonderfully penned, darlin'.

Bri [x]

I like the rhyme scheme. this poem just seems to flow, very good! 5/5

Great poem. I liked it. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem is touching, it feels like you are writing out of my heart, because thats how i feel most of the time & i understand

Great job.
Loved it.
My favorite part was:

I can't love anyone like this.
I'm not supposed to,
it aches to bad.
But I'm lost without you.

So cute and lovely.. The rhyming is great.

Take care

Really sad and sorrowful i especially liked those

You've emptied me.
Aren't you through?
You've got what you wanted.
So why am I still wanting you.

Well done
Take care
Laura

Seriously i love your writing. its like youre taking the words rite out of my mouth. your poems speak out to me and can relate to me. i love them. please keep writing.

Awwwwww that issssss true grl comment back

This also reminds me of a guy.
i love your poems because i can relate to them and you always make a good point in them.

So, for the sake of arguement, just admit you have been following my life through some sort of crystal ball. Once again, this poem is related to a situation that I have had the pleasure of being apart of and a shattered friends heart that I have had to sweep up...great job, hope you someday find it in yourself to open up again and let yourself be loved like you deserve. 5/5 -me

Another awesome poem. 5/5

I absolutely loved this poem.
I can relate to it, as many others surely can.
It seemed a bit cliche, but at the same time it didn't. I think the topic was more cliche, than the words and the poem. It had your style in it, Which I love by the way. :D

keep it up.
5/5

Wow so much emotion within, this was a great write as always. You are very talented with words, the rhyme was great. Amazing job.

This line, "So why am I still wanting you." should have a ? at the end not a period for it is a question not a regular sentance.

Peace, Joe

Well I have read all 5 poems and I am empressed to say the least at least for my tastes you are quite good. Please don't give up on writing you have a gift just keep pen to pad and share your thought swith everyone great job Plot121

So that was just written so true...I'm guessing it was about a boy...But anyway..It was really good...The flow was just flawless throughout the whole thing and it was worded just right...Enjoyable read...

5/5

Gave should be given, but otherwise a good poem. Work on flow, maybe?

Wow this is really good. like no joke, i can relate! and i know our stichs arent the same, but thats how im feeling! good job