This was a poem that didn't follow the normal standards and yet still blew most of what I read away. Great job with the flow and rhythm. I think you have an amazing talent and you utilize it in a creative and genuine way.
Wow.. this is great... I know how it is when your soulmate sticks in your mind...I have someone like that too... Thank you for all the votes and comments on my poems by the way... very much appreciated!!!
Well roy I don't know how you have managed to pump out 717 poems but you have and I find most of them pretty good. I liked this one as it was short and simple yet didn't lack any emotion. Nice and with words that most can relate to. peace
I liked it. I felt that it could be made better. The wording was ok.
"Because you have touched before."
might sound better if you said instead
"because I felt it before"
"because I felt your hand before"