Disappointment

by Linden   Mar 31, 2007


I'm a disappointment
Trust me and you will find
Someone you can’t be with
Because I fail every time

I'm a disappointment
Never doing what I'm told
Try and fail
I'm feeling really cold

I'm a disappointment
Don’t believe what I have done
There is always something I forgot
I guess I better run

I'm a disappointment
Trying to get away
From people that believe
I will go far someday.

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  • 16 years ago

    by aimee

    I likee it,
    its nice :) i like how you wrote it to.
    xx.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I agree with the other two I really liked this. I liked how you can take a line repeate it a thousand times and it never gets old, it feels natural. The only thing I didnt like to much was the last stanza it didnt really make much sence and I didnt feel the same passion that I felt in the beginning. Nice work though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Another very well written poem. I liked the repetition through out. Great work, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really like this one...
    I love the repetition, I think it helped get the point across very well.
    The flow was good throughout and the ending was perfect.

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