What Can I Say

by silence   Apr 13, 2007

What can I say
That won't make you go away?
Can I say that I
Think about you every day?

Or that I care
When it's at other girls you stare
Or that's I'm jealous
Do I dare?

Or that my wall has cracks
That are so very small
That you don't even see them
No, not at all

Can I tell you I hope
This is not in vein
That I want this to work
So I don't hurt again

I can't tell you anything
Because I'm scared you will leave
So now no matter what
In true love, I'll never believe.


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  • 11 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Oh, this was so sweet ashlie, i really hope he is getting better so that you guys can be happy, you made the poem flow so smoothly and the wording was beautiful 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ........It's kinda...missing something. In a way there's question of what it is about but at the same time you know what it's about. The words are what brings this down because it could be expressed better than it is. Just my thought on it. The first stanza had a nice touch to it though.

  • 11 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This is a good poem, good flow, nice rhythm but the only thing is:

    "Or that's I'm jealous"

    That not thats

    sorry but I had to correct it lol anyways great poem, keep it up!