I have ordered a new color for my eyes, guess what color is it?
hazel eyes
so a guy can write something beautiful like this to me. this girl s so lucky who u write for every minute. Is she deserve it?
i hope so
great job once more.

This poem definetly came from the heart, it was real and true.

As seeing those
Hazel eyes,
In my darkest moments
They are like the sunrise

Those 4 lines
Could they be anymore beautiful?
A wonderful write

Take Care, Bonnie

Awh, this was kinda sweet. I like your poetry but I find it very confusing Goran. I feel you don't have enough details included and its a bit all over the place. I know you say you don't ahve any grammer mistakes and this is probably true, but it doesn't really sound great. Still, the emotion was clear and strong. 4/5

Hazel Eyes maybe beautiful but sometimes they are full of tears. well i like it its really nice dast xosh Goran.

Very nice poem, I like how it went down with short lines. It's well organized and I enjoyed reading it, especially the last stanza. Well done 5/5

Pretty cool, im really feelin the last stanza.
good read, excellent flow. great job.

This is another great poem. It was pened wonderfully. 5/5.

Kalee

Wow.
powerfully written love.
i quite adored it.
5/5.

A lovely poem =)
great flow and love the last stanza..
nice work 5/5

Well i'm not tired of it, and i'm not going anywhere, your poems are too mesmerizing. they are beautiful, they touch my heart even though i know they're not about me. just keep on writing so i keep having something to read! 5/5

Hi
i really really liked this poem, i like how u keep writing about his hazel eye girl, geee, all the girls are jelous and i wonder so much what she thinks.
the whole poem was so smoth, and connected it wasn't forced or fragmanted, but really touching,,, with so much feeling
keep it up

Hey, i really liked this, i fallowed it very well but i just wondered in the first stanza did you meen for it to be poems after poems, because for some reason it just doesn't sound right when i read it alowed to myself.
I really liked this poem, i love poems from the heart, in my mind they are the best.

I liked it. i think my favorite part was the ending about the sunrise. But you were a bit repetitive with "heart". After so many times it takes the meaning of surprise out of it. The way you repeated "hazel eyes" was great though. And also think you should organize your stanzas better. They should have the same number of lines, because it helps the flow. I really like the emotion you used. I read two others of your poems but i am in a hurry because I have to be at church in an hour, but I really liked the description and imagery in the one about the "she loves me, she loves me not" just it didn't really seem poetic as much as story. Thank you for the comment it means allot.

God Bless

~skittles

Another amazing job.. well done

I love the emotion you used. Again, another great poem of yours. The flow was really nice!!!!!! well done, 5/5

~Chelsea

Oh my gawsh.
First of
This has no flow.
But you know what?
I EFFING LOVE IT!
I don't know why...
The words are not perfect.
The flow is weak.
And yet.
I like it.
I don't know why.
5/5

I think this poem is so beautiful, however i like how it is not "shakespeare" beautiful with hyperbole and exaggerated descriptions, i liked the simplicity, honesty and above all humour you contained within this poem, xx

I loved how you added a twist of rhyme to this poem so it wasn't overwhelming but it worked...I really enjoyed how you wrote about the pen like it had it's own mind and you weren't telling it what to do nice job I loved it!

I loved the words you used and they fit so perfectly.

I know this is one of your older poems but i love it as well as the other hazel eyes poems u wrote. I can relate cuz the love of my life has hazel eyes and i have alot of poems that has that in there. And people who read them tell me they're tired of hearin about his eyes. Who cares. Keep up the good work i love it,