Comments : My First Day at School

  • 10 years ago

    by Miko

    Lol!

  • 10 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Oh, wow, that was really good. I had no idea it was your mother till the end. This was my favorite part: I remember her ruler
    It was ten feet long
    She looked so scary
    Worst than King Kong

  • 10 years ago

    by melissa

    Lmao very funny

  • 10 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    LMAO! hahahaha lol
    that was very funny!
    Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Marie

    It's hilarious one part needs work tho
    Her homework was hard
    She gave us long division
    And then multiplication
    And then subtraction
    ... it doesnt seem to flow with the rest of it in rhythm.. other than that it's amazing... it's very rare you find a funny poem that's actually good but you did it!

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    HAHA! Talk about a surprise ending. I liked that, every child hates their teachers and the work they give out but it just made the poem that much greater that it was about your Mother. ^_^

    5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by malina

    That really made me smile..i liked so much...

  • 10 years ago

    by Perfection

    That was great man, this is the first funny poem Ive read that I liked alot and the ending was PERFECT...
    Ye I guess we all hate our teachers...

    Take Care and keep on with the funny stuff

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow wow wow, all the time i couldnt stop laughing and then in the end i was so surprised and still couldnt stop laughing...great one....no matter how far we all are but the intentions for teachers are same worlwide... :o))))

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes the end got me too. It was so funny as I read along.
    Great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Ha ha ha, this was a great poem. Original and funny, it sounds exactly like a picture book!

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    That was funny and very well written ,well done !!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Oh wow i love the twist at the end well done this is an excellently wrtten poem, well done indeed (and you said you weren't good pish posh hehe) xox lithium

  • 10 years ago

    by kiara

    That was so funny smile, she was my mother jeez id hate my mum to teach at my school let alone my class 5/5 kiara

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Haha that was hilarous, i like how you made it very sedutive, like in a way, up to the punch line. very unique

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    Ahhh! lmao omg i can't believe the twist on the end, that the teacher was the mom!! lol omg this made me laugh, cute poem! i loved the stanza---

    I remember this teacher
    She was cold and mean
    Her breath was horrible
    She needed some Listerine

    lol great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by ShaKayla

    This poem was halarious!! You did a real good job. I cracked up laughin and choked while drinking my water. Good Job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Loruhh

    OMG!!! Thats soooo cute! The ending caight me off guard!! REAL CUTE!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    "I remember this teacher
    She was cold and mean
    Her breath was horrible
    She needed some Listerine"

    Lmao!! That was priceless!! Completely priceless!!
    I loved the twist at the end! Excellent poem!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written.....so cute and funny! All the best, Debbie