Lol
true story?

Hah! I loved this so much! The ryhming was really good and the ending made me laugh. A great touch with having the teacher be the mom :D. I liked the Listerine touch as well :D, same with King Kong. If I could, I would rate you higher than 5/5, but that's as high as it'll go, so a full out 5/5! Keep it up, Wallace!

Hatori

Omgsh that is so cool lol so i love petry lol so i love your poems to lol

Dude how do you get your poems on there

Great job the flow was awesome thx for the comment and great poem it put a big smile on my face lol it was funny

keenan

LMAO - Very funny Wallace - and a great unexpected ending. Good job!

Haha interesting, i remember my first day of school i was hiding in a closet in my brother class room, nice poem!
-steven

I'll have to presume you used teacher as a substitute for your mother in this piece. 'Twas absolutely amusing and I had to suppress fits of giggles, I don't know why. But the ending completely shocked me, haha. I suppose you had fun writing this comical work. :)
Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care!
Love,
Debbie

Great poem! I was homeschooled for half a year and it was a lot like your poem! Good work!

Wow, twist ending! My mother was like that, I was homeschooled most my life!

Ahhahahahahaa! Thatt would suck. very funny, i needed this, thank you.

Wallace
This was really funny...LMAO.....Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Lol, that was really funny - I loved the ending too.

~Lizzie~

Great job love it so funny

Lol.....
But remember if it wasn't for your mother you wouldn't be in this world.

~Maria

Haha.
wow. i can sooo relate.
this is like the funniest poem i have EVER read...by far.
lol i still cant believe how much i can relate. lol. great job=]
-jenae

Well, i was not really waiting for this...
really nice =)
*isabel*

Wow this made me laugh thanks for commenting me.

Lol that was funny! I enjoyed this poem! well done! keep writing!

Hope u dont hate ur moder for real!
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nice,funny poem though