Brooding

by Debbie   Apr 16, 2007


In verdant prairies
where boughs of calloused
trees
cast green shadows
around me,
gale wind wafted through
leaves in such jocund
harmony.

With breath fawning
on my ears,
the vibrant breeze
murmured your name-
...softly, tenderly,
and soothingly...

O! How horrid Refrain
shrieked within,
like a tire raged by
the orb of heaven;
where oft I slipped
into the gap
'twixt rapture and despair.

Yet lying on green
pastures,
I listened in placid glee
with pensive thoughts
resonating
toward nature's
unspoken melody.

Then,

silence ensued...

�© 2007 by Debbie de Lara

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Marian, I like the way you penned it. You obviously have an outstanding talent for writing. this is great :)

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  • 18 years ago

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

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    by Corruption

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

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