Comments : You will never...

  • 10 years ago

    by azii

    Wow. I loved it. Great poem. First, I liked it when you changed the 'you will never know' to 'you will never see' but then when you continued saying that, it somehow got old.
    But still it was great. Very touching. You really seem to love that person.. Nicely done.

    Keep it up

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh my gad, that is totally so amazing, it fits exactly how i am feeling for a girl atm. Like exactly. oh my god. a little freaky lol. Its amazing, the rhyming and structure. just a little advice though, ti gets a little confusing when rreading, you could seperate it into stanzas or something. just to make it a little clearer. 5/5

    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Dan

    Love the poem. It had a great flow and kinda surprised me how well it meshed together. It would be nice to put it in stanzas but it still is very well written.

    -Daniel

  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMissReality

    Wow, that was amazing