Rock Star

Another awesome poem. Slightly more shallow and positive.. but in a good way! It just came across as a really relaxed and cool piece of modern ppetry. I think you should take off 'for me' on the last line, that way I think it would flow slightly better. It would also be excellent if integrated into a song.

Sole. x

That was good and it said everything i would have said

<3 Love It !

Cute poem.. I liked the message sometimes the things that we love to do the most are the things that are the harders to do for a living. However if you really love to do these kinds of things I really hope that you keep trying and never let anything get in the way of your dreams.

Make is big someday = Make it big someday

The flow was off, and by all means it was not the best poem that I have ever read, but I still understand where you are coming from, and I still was dragged into reading the poem and I wouldn't be able to stop. Your words seem so vivid and real, it's hard to pull away.

Good poem, Nice meaning.

5/5
~Stephen White