Thinking of you...

by Alex   Apr 21, 2007


Driving in the car, in the back seat,
I hear a slow smooth song on the radio, staring out the side window,
I stare at one spot on the road
the yellow line deviding the lanes.

Thinking of you,
in a deep sense of mind,
my throat gets that oh so familiar lump,
we hit a bump.
...And I'm pulled back to reality.

A tear sliding down my cheek,
I flitter about making sure
I don't look like I was crying,
but inside I know I'm dying.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautifully written and so very sad at the same time...though short you managed to put such a lot of emotion and depth into this piece, and it makes for a very intense read.
    beautiful work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Aahaa it relates to me.. nice work i loved your poem offcourse words was also nicely used in this poem i willm ust give 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Good work...very touching...sudden ride to reality...great work....u've done this one so well..in a real well manner..kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • I agree with Gem, you make it look easy. I have a hard time writing poems taht don't rhyme. Good work though, kiddo. I liked the message in this poem. =)
    ~Ally~

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Dieing = dying

    I liked this poem.. it was short and I liked how nothign rhymed.. the only thing I would change is I would put some metaphores in it.. makes it a bit more creative and more poem like instead of just seeming like a story.