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by silence   May 4, 2007


You told me to trust you
With my fragile heart
You told me you had loved me
Right from the start

I did the wrong thing
By sending jaimie in
I didn't know what to say
I didn't know where to begin

When I walked away last night
It was the worst feeling I've had in awhile
I didn't want to think it was over
I just wanted to be in denial

When you took your cd
I thought 'this is it'
When I sat back in the car
I didn't know how worse it could get

I couldn't bring myself
To hang up the phone
I don't know if it was you
Or that I shouldn't be alone

The thoughts that were running
Through my mind last night
Shouldn't have existed
And were kept out of site

To turn my back on my love
And walk away from you
Was the hardest thing I've done
Especially with this love so new

I want to make you happy
And always make you smile
And I know what your going through
Will take more then a little while

So for now I'm very patient
And loving and kind
And I'll be there for anything
Even just to help you unwind

Believe my love is true
No matter what feelings you show
So trust me enough to tell me
These are things I need to know

The thought of being separated from you
Even for a couple of days
Was something I couldn't accept
Because I knew we would go our separate ways

But for now it's over
We've made it through our first fight
We got clown love
And everything turned out alright

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  • 10 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awwww!! Last stanza was amazing.
    You have your way with words. Now I really have ran outta words to say about your poems. I'm stumbling =P
    =] Great work. MCL xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awwww Ashlie!! you really do have a way with words, how you can just write about the events that have happened and still make me smile in the end, even in a sad poem, your just sooo positive!!
    I may not have clown love for you, but I do love you wiv all my heart hun!!

    Love always
    Lucy!

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Great ending.....puts a smile on ones face. I like how you write, whatever happens you always right about it and it always has great flow and rhythmn and goes well together. Keep writing!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This made me smile at the end ashlie, you use your poems to say exactly what you want to say and say it perfectly. this is so sweet, 5/5 i hope your doing good.
    luv gabriella