Comments : Wicked Game [Acrostic]

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I like this. Its different.. i enjoyed reading it.. intresting topic! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem with a great message, i do agree with you, we live in the world of dreams, but sometimes those dreams are the reason we can live, in my openion if it was not for dream, this life would have been harder than it is now..........
    again great poem that deserve nothing less than a perfect 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautifully penned poem!...Great message!...but though v live in a wrld of dearms..if not for the dreams...we would hv given up long back!...luv ur poem anyways...a good 5/5!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem because the message behind it was displayed nicely. Penned well and very truthful.. It was nicely written and enjoyable to read. Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I liked this alot. Gave me this odd feeling.

    The Angel of Secrets

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow. The fact that Acrostics can be really tricky to write, you did an amazing job. Everything about it is just so well written. The flow, word use, description. Most of all, I love the fact that it is unique. It gets so monotonous reading the same topic poems over and over again. Excellent write. =] 5/5 Defintely.

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I loved it. It is yet has a twist of fantisie to it.
    It also has a great flow. Keep up the great work:) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Liked the message behind and it was different:) Very well written! Amazing poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow....I really liked the second word stanza the best. But the entire poem was brilliant. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Acrostics are hard to write, and you did an excellent job. Well penned, nice word choice, and great message. great job well done .5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    I thank you for writing a fine Acrostic and for being my sexy hippo as well! -coughs- Now, the following lines are in error:

    "Witch craft and fairy tales" (sic) ( = Witchcraft is misspelled. It should be one word only.)

    "Caring us away from reality" (sic) ( = Carrying is misspelled.)

    "Griping on to the our loved ones" (sic) ( = Gripping is misspelled.)

    Other than that, you did a well done job upon writing this form. I was unsure whether this wicked game is magic, sorcery and witchcraft or mere dreams and fantasies, I dare say. On the whole, however, I enjoyed reading its substance. Indeed, such simple pleasures--dreams, fantasies, etc.--bring us away from reality, whereas it is the last refuge of the complex. (I learned that from a book by Oscar Wilde.) Thank you for sharing, hippo. =] I love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    A wonderfully different poem. I enjoyed it very much. Nice title, this is one wicked game humanity can scarcely do without though lol. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Well done, well written and i enjoyed it alot. Yes i noticed the spelling mistakes but i think we can still figure out what you meant lol and it was really good. keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hmm.
    Very creative.
    I didn't like the flow/lack of rhyme, but other than that, it was very nice.

    Thank you for sharing! =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    OOO I LIKE IT! LEAVESME THINKIN..... ANDI LIKE SOME OF THE WORDS U USE!

  • 10 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I really liked the content of this poem. You have great talent!!!

    5/5

    Josie