Great poem with a great message, i do agree with you, we live in the world of dreams, but sometimes those dreams are the reason we can live, in my openion if it was not for dream, this life would have been harder than it is now..........
again great poem that deserve nothing less than a perfect 5/5
Wow. The fact that Acrostics can be really tricky to write, you did an amazing job. Everything about it is just so well written. The flow, word use, description. Most of all, I love the fact that it is unique. It gets so monotonous reading the same topic poems over and over again. Excellent write. =] 5/5 Defintely.
I thank you for writing a fine Acrostic and for being my sexy hippo as well! -coughs- Now, the following lines are in error:
"Witch craft and fairy tales" (sic) ( = Witchcraft is misspelled. It should be one word only.)
"Caring us away from reality" (sic) ( = Carrying is misspelled.)
"Griping on to the our loved ones" (sic) ( = Gripping is misspelled.)
Other than that, you did a well done job upon writing this form. I was unsure whether this wicked game is magic, sorcery and witchcraft or mere dreams and fantasies, I dare say. On the whole, however, I enjoyed reading its substance. Indeed, such simple pleasures--dreams, fantasies, etc.--bring us away from reality, whereas it is the last refuge of the complex. (I learned that from a book by Oscar Wilde.) Thank you for sharing, hippo. =] I love it!