Comments : Steamy Affair

  • 11 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Awesome job5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Fran

    This is such an erotic and exciting poem yet remains tender and written with love. You are very talented.

  • 10 years ago

    by gack60

    Very nice piece. loved the way it was erotic, but not in ur face erotic, it told a really nice story and it flowed really well.



  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Nicely done - "steamy"

  • 10 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Wow. very nicely written. excellent use of words :)

    Ally. x

  • 10 years ago


    Over 900 visits to this poem.Wow!!
    So erotic. It takes talent to write like that.
    The imagery is so vivid. Nice work? What's next?

  • 10 years ago

    by Just Jo

    This poem is great. very sexual and quite intense lol. xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Harutan

    Nice usage of words and imagery, it flows very well.
    Your very talented at your art, cant wait to read more.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    WoW...This is really good. The use of words are wonderful...5/5...xoxo

  • 10 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    That was great loved it, well written and very romantic and sensual...keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Tony

    Teasing opening lines that slowly build to a very explosive climax. The steam is coming out of my ears as I write lol. Wow!

  • 9 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    WOW .............Xp

  • 9 years ago

    by John Long

    Steamy isn't the word, WOW!!!!
    When are we going to see some new poems, it's been far far too long!

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    It's erotic but very sensational. Such a heart wrenching piece, 5/5. Em x

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    An amazing write.... Nicely written... with talent :) and passion! Well done.