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by Lesbian Natalie
This is such an erotic and exciting poem yet remains tender and written with love. You are very talented.
Very nice piece. loved the way it was erotic, but not in ur face erotic, it told a really nice story and it flowed really well.
Nicely done - "steamy"
by A l y s s a
Wow. very nicely written. excellent use of words :)
by FELTON PHILLIPS
Over 900 visits to this poem.Wow!!
So erotic. It takes talent to write like that.
The imagery is so vivid. Nice work? What's next?
by Just Jo
This poem is great. very sexual and quite intense lol. xx
Nice usage of words and imagery, it flows very well.
Your very talented at your art, cant wait to read more.5/5
by Mike Martin
WoW...This is really good. The use of words are wonderful...5/5...xoxo
by Jodie Phillips
That was great loved it, well written and very romantic and sensual...keep it up
Teasing opening lines that slowly build to a very explosive climax. The steam is coming out of my ears as I write lol. Wow!
by John Long
Steamy isn't the word, WOW!!!!
When are we going to see some new poems, it's been far far too long!
It's erotic but very sensational. Such a heart wrenching piece, 5/5. Em x
An amazing write.... Nicely written... with talent :) and passion! Well done.