Wow this soundes like the relationship i have with my mom. great work of poetry. you have a great gift. you know how to express you emotion in your poems so that readers can imagine and get a clear picture in there head. great work.5/5
Everything you are[[,]] I truly look up to you.
Add a comma there, sweetums :]
When your ex hurt you... hmm.
That to me was a bit random.
helped me with everything I needed to know
Mom I may fight with you but I want you to know
Try to find a synonym for "know"
I believe some of the things you say
Are quite over used.
All in all.
It wasn't the best I've read
Coming from you.
It also wasn't your worst.
It didn't really catch my attention.
It was just... blah to me.
Look up to you.< take out you.
every thing< one word.
cheered me on when I need it. < take off -ed or add -ed to need.
Every thing < one word.
thing you do[[.]] it is< comma or take out it.
That i < captialize I.
overall you did a great job.
once again, punctuation and grammar.
but still ; 4/5