Comments : Mom

  • 10 years ago

    by Amanda

    That was sweet, it makes me wish I was a mom.

  • Good poem.
    It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
    It shows what a mum is suppose to be.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 10 years ago

    by lizzle

    Thats a great poem!!it reminded me of me and my mom!5/5

  • Good poem, nice flow
    Theres only a little bit of things that I can say about this poem.
    Tenses,
    But still a 5/5!! <3

  • 10 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Very sweet I loved it, first stanza a little cliche sounding but other than that well done. Great mother's day poem. Thought college should be through college. 4/5

  • Wow this soundes like the relationship i have with my mom. great work of poetry. you have a great gift. you know how to express you emotion in your poems so that readers can imagine and get a clear picture in there head. great work.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very sweet poem...it fowed perfectly and it's touching indeed..n lol...it reminds me of me n my mom.....Great work.kp it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is a cute poem..I like the premise of it but I think you could reword it a little bit for maximum effect. Nonetheless, good poem! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aww what a sweet poem.. i really enjoyed it.. great job and keep it up.. thanks for the comment =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful....so moving and touching, it really pullled me into the poem after reading the first few lines.
    I adore the ending line, it was so heartfelt and sweet.

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is soo sweet.. a very enjoyable read.. the flow was fantastic as well as the wording.. keep it up :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Everything you are[[,]] I truly look up to you.
    Add a comma there, sweetums :]
    When your ex hurt you... hmm.
    That to me was a bit random.
    helped me with everything I needed to know

    Mom I may fight with you but I want you to know
    Try to find a synonym for "know"

    I believe some of the things you say
    Are quite over used.
    All in all.
    It wasn't the best I've read
    Coming from you.
    It also wasn't your worst.
    It didn't really catch my attention.
    It was just... blah to me.
    4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This one flowed straight from the heart very touching

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    Look up to you.< take out you.
    every thing< one word.
    cheered me on when I need it. < take off -ed or add -ed to need.
    Every thing < one word.
    thing you do[[.]] it is< comma or take out it.
    That i < captialize I.

    overall you did a great job.
    once again, punctuation and grammar.
    but still ; 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very sweet job. It's always nice to read about somebody feeling appreciation towards a family member. I really enjoyed reading.

  • 10 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    The message was pleasant and sweet. good job. I dont have a mother, this makes me feel like I am missing out on a lot. good job
    Bree

  • 10 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I liked that one. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 10 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    5/5. really nice poem...