Hello God

by Sylvia   May 17, 2007


Hello
Is all I can say
To someone as high as you
Hello God
How've You been?
Are You happy?
Or are You sad?
Why does my life
Seem so full of sorrow?
Why did my family
Get ripped apart
Hello God
I have so many questions
I'd like to ask You
The first one on my list though
Is will you forgive me
All that I've done?
All my mistakes?
Please don't forget me
If I ever wander
If I ever get lost
Hello God
Will you always love me?

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  • 9 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    Good job! God is the only "person" who will for sure always love you

  • 10 years ago

    by Adelle

    Your a very special person and your poetry is a gift from god, you got me thinking about a piece in the bible when the followers of Jesus asked him why he sat with the sinners he said (In the new century version) they needed him more than some of the people who had always done good. God loved these people even though they had done many bad things in life. Gods love in unconditional he loves each and every one of use we just have to ask for his forgiveness (and really mean it sometimes that’s the bit where we mess up) God loves you and if you ask for him he will always be there.
    I have added you to my favourites your a brilliant author.

  • 10 years ago

    by m4mm07h

    "Seem so full of sorrow?"
    Here u coulda put "seem so sad".
    It fits better.sry i have a habit o catching the little things. Otherwise pretty bomb poem. Kinda scared bout the ripped apart part.as in literally or like divorced? Ummm sry if i offend u. I wont saygod will always love u cause that is tthe only thing everypne else said. So good job short and simple...5/5 ::P

  • 10 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    His love NEVER dies sweetie. It is forever and always. For every season there is a reason and a purpose under heaven. He has absolutely amazing plans for you. Let him be your father. Let him mend your heart. Let him bring peace to you. All you have to do is fall on your knees and cry and he will meet you there. He loves you SO much.

    -Trisha

  • 10 years ago

    by kristen

    I liked the tone of the poem and what you were writing on. he will always love you! his love's unconditional!

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