Comments : Kiss Me Goodbye

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    ~Bravo!~ Standing ovation Cindy!!! ~claps~
    One of your best......a definite contender in Bob's contest!!! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by alone in the crowd

    This is such a wonderful write! you are a very talented person! 5/5 please rate and comment some of mine!

    -Ashley

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write Cindy, very sad and heartfelt in every word, great job ,God bless you, your friend Tracy~~~5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    Dear Cindy
    I can only imagine how much it pained you to write this. I could feel your emotion pouring from the words.
    These four little stanzas brought tears to my eyes. Incredibly moving piece , my friend!
    Take care sweet lady
    Luanne

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Within satin lined box
    Dark blue suit and tie
    Eternal Slumber
    Wish everything was lies"

    as sad it is to hear those words, i really love the "eternal slumber", it gives it a much more peaceful vibe, but still expresses the pain that you're feeling, very good work...5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Ahhh. Awsome and lovely. Like dis alot. Take care ur friend hassan 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The flow and imagery were good. This poem was full of sad emotion. You did a really good job on this!

  • 10 years ago

    by sian

    Oh gosh what an amazing poem, this is increadibly moving. A masterpiece cindy, well done xxx sian

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    How angsty and sorrowful this piece is! Ah! that was a very nice read. Good luck in the contest. Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    You've done it again....touched my heart and left a tear ,I love your writes they are always so beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    "Bright red flowers adorn
    Final resting place
    Hole dug, darkness waits
    Only peace is God's grace"

    I'm reduced to tears...
    By that stanza as right now it means more than you know
    5/5 Cindy
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Kiss these lips goodbye
    Missing lover's touch
    Only left in dreams
    Heartache's pain too much

    I loved the way you have written these lines. Its really spellbinding.
    God bless you Cindy.
    I have always 5/5 for you.
    Tc mwah

    With love
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    This is really good. you should tell me what you think of some of my poems..

    -Chelsea-

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Another sad peace, but their is always hope where God lies. great poem cindy xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is so heartbreakingly touching. I am truly moved by this piece, you have really written some wonderful stuff. I can feel the pain and sadness and can only pray this grants you even the slightest bit of release.

    Take care,

    GaryJ

  • 10 years ago

    by Kayla

    This was a beautiful poem Cindy.. I can't decribe it, it's just wonderful. So much sadness.. I especially liked the line:

    "Within satin lined box
    Dark blue suit and tie
    Eternal Slumber
    Endless tears are cried"

    I enjoyed that part a lot.. keep up the awesome work love! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 10 years ago

    by Mona F

    Nice poem!!!!!! i love it

  • 10 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Me likes =] vivid images and great use of words =] wooo =P

    Matt x

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow!.. excellent job.. short but still chilling. Great job! keep it up =]

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Oh how very sad. very well written. you brought a tear to my eye. 5/5