This poem was very deep! 5/5
<3 briana

Its amazing how you can pen down those feelings.
Keep it princess.
Shinaz

This poem is amazing, really well done hun xxxxx

Cindy,thats so sad and intense.Can feel your emotions so clearly through words.Beautifuly penned.

Bright red flowers adorn
Final resting place
Hole dug, darkness awaits
Only peace in God's grace

It speaks volumes, loved this one.

Take care
chavii.

This peom is awesome
its sooo kool!
i luve it! xxx

That was real good. love it.

Wow!
this is an AMAZING poem!!!!!!

:D
5/5

OMG...this is really good! It's so sad and I swear, I almost started crying! It's almost like I could feel what was happening and what was goin' through your head when you wrote it. It captures you and gets your attention! 5, all the way!

I like it its so emotional!!

It was ok

Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^
Your sincerely
Hani

Great work!

Holy crap girl! you got some talent there! lol keep up the good writing! ^-^

V. beautiful poem! i loved the ending reference to god, nice touch :)

That was well written 5/ 5

Wow.. that is really great you are like a million times better than me haha. nice use of words.
thanks,
-Chelsea-

Heyy i really liked the words u used in this poem. very touching write xx

No kisses from my side for sure. Good poem though.

all the best and take care

This is a great poem! you are very talented! make sure you use your talent and dont let it die!
xXxX

Cindy, this was a great poem, your talent really shone in this one, my friend.
beautifully written, but very sad.
keep up the awesome work,
love your dear friend, Tara-Kay
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