You And I. [Tetractys]

by christina marie   May 21, 2007


You.
Perfect.
Brilliant.
So amazing.
You are everything to me and much more.

I can't believe you are finally mine.
Stealing my heart
So in love
Belong here
Us.

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This is my first Tetracty.

Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound
or comic, witty or wise using 20 syllables. They can be
written with more than one verse but each subsequent
verse must invert the syllable count. There is no limit
to the number of verses. The structure is:

line 1 - 1 syllable
line 2 - 2 syllables
line 3 - 3 syllables
line 4 - 4 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables

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Copyright © 2007
Christina Hurley.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is an awesome poem. It's really emotional and sweet. Why do you say ppl fck over you? 5/5
    -vino