Bed of Roses

by Daisy if you do   May 24, 2007


I cry unto thee
Dost thou hunger linger deep?

Aye! Doth thy hunger pit!
Twisting, writhing with each fit!

Hast thou a need?
Quenched not a ravenous steed?

Thy nectar upon thee sourest lip
Sweetened by the merest sip

'Tis not mineself for thee enough?
Upon beds of roses if giveth thine love?"

Yae! If by thorns tear ye mine heart
Thy sweetest love shalt never depart

Dixie

** I tried the Old English format for this and do not know if I have done okay with it or not. But I tried.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I think you did just fine with the old english. I can't ever understand old english and I couldn't quite understand this so great job! *laughing* I understood the poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very unique. I enjoyed seeing you change up the norm. I think you did good job. the flow was good, interesting style and perfect length.

  • 16 years ago

    by KellyDanielle

    It is sooooo awesome that you used that old english typed theme. it kind of reminded me of one of shakesperes works.... and thats a good thing! keep up the good work....

    nice job,
    kelly

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    You did great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW beautifully written poem , I love it,great job
    keep up the good work and have a great day, your friend Tracy5/5~

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