Comments : Cerulean Tinged Waves

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh I LOVE this!
    So beautiful...the imagery you protrayed in this piece is amazing, it created beautiful vivid pictures for me.
    This style looks hard to do, yet you have mastered it beautifully.

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    I like this poem and the words you used were great!!! I also like the form, it's quite unique.
    peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    You did a wonderful job on this piece. imagery and word choices are excellent. What a wonderful picture this paints for the minds eye.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem, was one of the first I saw like it , but it was very well written ,I really liked it ,keep up the good work, your free Tracy 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I was confused to read this lol had to read it 3 time to get it lol well that will teach me to read thigs this early in the morning :) now i feel that much more silly :) now to the poem it made me remenise the countless times ive been on holidays and seen the dolphins, swam with them too once :) they're the most amazingly playfull creatures :) thnak you for brining those memories back :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by e l flo

    Damn. an amazing job yet again. dang. i dunno how you do it. it is truly amazing what you do.

    keep it up gem.

    oh btw i tried doing a terzanelle and its hard! check it out if you want =]

    amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Another brilliantly written piece, m'dear. Its imagery was simply exquisite and vibrant!
    A pleasurable, playful read, I dare say. :) Keep it up! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite amazing. The description was beautiful, imagery vivid and flawless. I loved the style anyone who can pull that off is truely talented. Well done on this and enjoyable read. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Amazing poem You bring to life how playful and beautiful dolphins actually are. Very unique poem, you defo gots talent.

    Kelly
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    WOW!!...LOVED IT!....awesome awesome work..
    The description was great...the imagery was so so perfect!...
    Excellent write!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This poem is wonderful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Aww thats so amazing and beautiful poem , loved it ,Perfectly penned just as expected by you :)

    Love
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This another beautiful poem.the imaginary was so perfect.keep up the good work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by bella

    Awesum poem keep up the good work pl;z comment on some of mine thnx

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful imagery and excellent job on this difficult form. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    OMG this is superb and even morethan that. Im spellbound dear. This is extremely unique and outstanding. Wow I feel so small to comment with my meager words. Its worth 100/100

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Tell me something please: do you hv a book of World's Best Poetry which has never been published or do u hear songs which has never been sung...from where do you get all these ideas...these words...am i living in some other world??
    whats the name of those magical pills...tell me.. :o)

    beautiful...just soooo elegant

    loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Dang. You are the second person I've commented that has done a palidrome. I seriously need to start one soon.

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    How long did it take you to do this, and what was going through your mind. Snce I want to write one like this, do you have suggestions?

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    The poem was pretty. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    THAT INCREDIBLE! I mean WOW! How did you do that?!?! I could never do a poem like that, that form was just incredible! :) GREAT job! 100/5 :) :) :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Nebula

    Lovely image. you know a poem is good when you go back and read it again to make sure you got it all in!
    ;)