I liked it. It had a touch of fantasy to it yet it also had truth and meaning to it. It had great word choice and a wonderful flow. I gave it a 5/5.

I really enjoyed this poem, it was like God and satan were doing battle to see who's more powerful. At the end when you say "how could something so wrong, feel so very right" the world is ending yet we know the one's who deserve to move on in a better place will, sometimes the worst is for the better. Excellent job 5/5

This was quite interesting to tell you the truth, This poem had me hooked from begining to end. the message portrayed throughout this was great "good vs evil" really capturing. Well done with this i enjoyed it alot~mel

Wow. This poem is very deep. To me it speaks of good and evil and the struggle between them both. It also shows that good can win over evil. It also speaks about (to me anyway) that our society is evil and is the torturous monster and the beast. This is a very deep poem. I loved it. The words and evrything flowed off the tounge very nicely. 5/5 for sure!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I will be honest as always.
wow, i loved it.
I am not sure of the meaning, but i will keep searching because it is there somewhere i know.
A very good piece
best wishes
Tara-Kay
x

"Your in for a nasty treat" should be "you're". I thought it was a very well put-together poem, however I didn't like the first stanza as much as I did the rest. I suppose it was the repetition you used, which you discontinued in the rest of the poem. The flow was a bit off in some places, but other than that, I think it was pretty nice,

I lyked this poem it made me think about my past nd how much i have changed with dealing with my problems!! its amazing how you can come up with things nd show how your feeling

i give it 5/5

Who that poem was so good i dont even know were to start

Great poem-- especially narrative and descriptive.

Word choice could use a bit of improvement, but the brief, almost laid-back style of the poem works well.

Nice work!

Geez.. very dark. and sharp. i like this one alot. u r talented. 5/5

You know this poem DOES have more then one meaning to it and i love how you did that! I could never write a poem like that and i just wish that i could! I cant belive how talented you are and your younger then me..keep it up and never put down that pen!

Great poem. the only line i felt didn't quite fit with the rythm was

The night of the worst sin of all sins

i think it needs 2 be changed around slightly only to fit better

but well done
xoxo

This is a great poem. I love the way your portrayed the surroundings. Great piece. 5/5. Good Job

Love thisss.

rhyming is good.

i especially enjoyed this part:
"Now the world is ending
People are dropping like flies
How could something so wrong
Feel so very right?"

very good.

You are really talented!! i liked how dark the poem was since most of mine are really dark. keep up the great work