Truely a beautiful masterpeice. I Just realise sweetie that I didnt have you on my favorites! what a mistake. Im adding you now. Back to this poem. This style you represted beautifully. An reversed Etheree right? Truely an amazing read even better write im sure. You pulled this poem off to the full extent. Well done loved it~mel
Another great poem from the great writer of P&Q, you never disappoint me with your great works,
personaly i really love this style and i find it so hard to deal with,lol. but you have done a great job.
keep it up dear.
Temptation is all around us, in every minute of everyday we're forced to make choices, some harder then others. I loved the poem and the meaning behind it is fantastic, we all fall to the hands of temptation sooner or later. amazing job 5/5
IOH OH OH!! I loved this!!
it was so COOL!!!! like whoaaa! the vocab and imagery you used was fantastic! and i really like this style of writing, it suits you, you should write more like this! loved it!
Oh wow. i love your use of vocabulary, its so clever at forming images in the mind! i like the style, i dont see this one around that much. great work hun
keep it up.
n sorry for the late rrc =]
nuf luv x