Comments : Wrapped Up In You

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    This is an absolutly beautiful poem. The love you have for your wife shines.

    Relax and dream the dreams of love
    Knowing I will be always by your side
    As I will always be wrapped up in you
    Will you always lay with me in this life
    Letting me love you forever my darling wife

    This stanza makes me long to be with my husband once again...You have something special...always treasure each and every moment.
    Your friend Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    Bill you have the ability to reach into the reader's heart with your words and leave them breathless.

    A beautiful verse filled with loving words ....
    You have definitely found your twin soul, dear heart.

    (((Big hugs, big brother)))

    This is a beautiful piece of your heart displayed in ink .... or text rather ... either way...it's beautiful

    Muah
    Luanne

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bill,
    "Like a freight train it hits me at dawn
    Your body curled up next to mine
    I am the luckiest man alive
    Lying in this bed wrapped up in you
    Comfortable, loved and feeling new"

    What a way to start a dedication. Wonderful word choice and expression.

    Oh to feel that kind of love. You are truelly blessed as is your wife.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Bill,
    This brought me to tears. This was so beautiful. Men mostly do not understand women as the same with us not understanding men and their actions. Just these words and the meaning of them mean so much to a woman. She is truly just as luck as you to have you convey your feelings as such. Beautiful dedication, and truly a beautiful write.

    Kay

  • 10 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Awwwwwwwwww this is beautifully written it really is, made me feel all fuzzy inside! I hope my better half sees me through such loving eyes...what a lucky woman you have in your life - great write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis an excellent poem bill, i like the way you did the rhyme scheme, also a great choice in wording, i give it a perfect 5/5!! keep the coming!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was beautiful, you penned it nicely and I felt this deep within my heart. A sweet dedication which was heartfelt capturing. Your word choice strong and effective. Your ryhme scheme amazing. This was a really amazing poem which you wrote in great depth full of pure emotions. Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    It indeed was a lovely, endearing piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very beautiful poem. I love it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is so beautifully worded with a very strong flow. Your wife must be very proud of you in case if it is real. max ratings

  • 10 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    Any wife to receive this poem must be incredibly lucky to have the man who wrote it give it to her. You must love your wife very much, and you're a very good poet without trying too hard. GREAT job. :D

    Ally.

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    This was so beautiful!! great poem! =) xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Billi Vermillion

    Wow.
    Passoniate.
    I wish some guy would feel like this for me.

    Your a great writer.

  • 10 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful i'll write this comment and voting to for your all poems 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by waiting4U2Bmine

    As I was reading your poem It was easy to imagine and picture what your words were saying. Nicely done you romantic you!

  • 10 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3