This endears me exceedingly. It reminds me of the children rhymes and songs which I used to sing aloud. In any case, I have no critique whatsoever; 'twas simply brilliant. Nice work, nonetheless. I actually enjoyed reading and rereading it. Or, should I say, singing? =]
all the best and take care,
Mmmmm.... it wasn't all that funny or cute. It sounded more like you just wanted to put something up on this website because you registered for it. It was simple, unorginal, and required to thought to write in my opinion.
Ok, so this isnt the best poem that i have read, however for your first attempt of writting on P&Q it was not bad. It had some cute moments, which is good.
'Funny' poems i find are always the hardest to write...So i can not really critique other than say it wasnt really to my taste. Good write though.
This was really cute lol 4/5, brought bak memories of being in a daycare center lol, i must admit, i was expecting something a lot longer and in depth b/c thats all i have been readin all day lol thanx 4 the flashbacks tho lol