Comments : Bow-wow black cat

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...funny...i mean cute...yeah kind of ..
    Well written short and yeah i had fun reading this one...
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I thought that it was very cute. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Amazing poetry so nice to read and the rhythm is so beautiful. I just love it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I liked that, good reyming there i give it a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    This endears me exceedingly. It reminds me of the children rhymes and songs which I used to sing aloud. In any case, I have no critique whatsoever; 'twas simply brilliant. Nice work, nonetheless. I actually enjoyed reading and rereading it. Or, should I say, singing? =]
    all the best and take care,
    Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so interesting and so funny
    But i guess it is do you have instead of have you
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Angela

    Lol awww this ones cute.. you should make a longer one so we can see what your made of... its precious :)
    <3ang
    check me out

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a quite humorous parody5>>>>>

  • 10 years ago

    by Riz

    XD AHAHAHAHA! My brothers didn't find it funny! But I did, well I didn't get it but I still laughed because it was so random! Random stuff makes me laugh! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Thats a cool poem! short but funny and cute! i really liked it. if you keep writitng you could beacome a very good writer!!! this is a 5/5 nice job!

  • 10 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Okay...I didn't think it was funny and you stole if from baa baa black sheep but you just changed the words...I don't know..Really didn't like it...Sorry....

    3/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Synh

    Mmmmm.... it wasn't all that funny or cute. It sounded more like you just wanted to put something up on this website because you registered for it. It was simple, unorginal, and required to thought to write in my opinion.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Ok, so this isnt the best poem that i have read, however for your first attempt of writting on P&Q it was not bad. It had some cute moments, which is good.
    'Funny' poems i find are always the hardest to write...So i can not really critique other than say it wasnt really to my taste. Good write though.
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Aww, it was very cute. It's like a nursery rhyme, isn't it? It reminded me of my childhood, when I was about 6.

    It won't say it was a work of art or anything, but it was very sweet and a fun read for me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    This was really cute lol 4/5, brought bak memories of being in a daycare center lol, i must admit, i was expecting something a lot longer and in depth b/c thats all i have been readin all day lol thanx 4 the flashbacks tho lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its cute and all...and i know the "wool" line works with bah bah black sheep...but "full" doesnt really fit the one you're trying to work here, but other than that it was excellent, good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was pretty good. It was short and in a sense
    sort of funny

    the ending was good, but maybe it could have rhymed. BUt the flow was nice

    great job, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Riley

    You know what this reminds me of?
    Those little hand games that everyone used to play when they were little.
    Very cute :)

  • 10 years ago

    by LovexMe

    This poem wasnt the greatest, but not bad for your first poem. Ba-Ba-Black Sheep, wasn't it?
    I dont really understand this line:

    And one for the one who gives me a kiss

    Have fun and keep writing!
    --Trinity

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful and Crazy

    Aww that was a really cute poem. I like how you put a new twist on the old nursury rhyme.