Can't Deny It Any Longer

by Marcus   Jun 5, 2007


At first I didn't even like you a bit
I thought you was just another girl who did dumb shit
I used to feel like that for a while
But I don't anymore, I can't continue this denial

At a point I started to notice how cute you are
I started to admire you, which seems bizarre
Because I still was denying how I really was feeling
Then your smile swept me off my feet and sent me through the ceiling

You know the smile that I'm talking about
It makes my heart beat so fast like it'll fall out
You always got that smile on your face
It makes me want to grab you and just embrace

As we started to talk more, we would laugh at a dumb joke
Then you would smile again; I would try to tell you how I feel then choke
As I got to know you more I realize we do got a lot of similarities
For example, we both are genuine and speak with sincerity

I am still scared to tell you how I feel so I'm writing it first
I had to get my feelings out some way or I might have just burst
Trying to hold them in because I know I want to be more than your friend
I can no longer act like I don't because its not in my nature to pretend

I hope that this isn't too awkward for you
I just have to tell you how I feel; I have to
So I'm here writing all my feelings from within me
I want to be your Mickey Mouse; you can be my mini

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Its the most wonderful poem ever. the girl is very lucky cause it is oh my god. you should give it to her. but in the first two lines you messed up.

    ~*angela*~
    aka~*luzyou*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this is really sweet, i think you should definitely show it to her! it was just amazing. keep on writing. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awwwwwww....so cute
    very very sweet..i loved the last line..the starting,the lines in between..lol....everything..very cute..hope the girl read this one..
    Excellent write marcus=)

    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    If this doesn't show the girl how you feel about her then nothing will, If I were her i would be touched at the vey least. The grammer was off in some places, but the flow was good, and the emtion was deep and raw I probaly could have been more powerful, but the simple but effective word choice rally worked for you good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    Hey... i just read your post to my thing telling me which ones you wanted me to read so i guess you'll be getting three comments from me tonight.

    anyways. i love the overall feeling of this poem. i understand how you feel. the whole smile of the girl that just kills you inside kind of thing. good job capturing that. and i love the line "I can no longer act like I don't because its not in my nature to pretend".

    great job for a spure of "raw emotion."

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