Once again you have written a great poem. The word choice was wonderful and the flow of coures was great. I liked how you wrote about missing someone faraway and couldn't wait to see if that person called. I know how that feels. I gave this poem a 5/5.
Awww that is sooo sweet and yet the truth from the heart, like when your waiting by the phone for that 1 call from that special person... and it never rings. Is there a store I can buy your books from or is it only over the net, I need to get a credit debit card so I can make online purchases. hmmm, I will look further into that, I love your poetry!.
Wow this is nice, beautiful and alot of people can relate to it. Although my man is not so far away i still get so excited when i have a message from him when i wake up :)
Well written enjoyable read.
Keep it up :)
This was quite a beautiful poem with a sweet meaning portrayed behind it. I liked the flow it wasnt off at all. The style interesting as always. Your word choice was deep, powerful, strong, and stunning. I found this poem to be capturing coming straight from the heart. Well done on a perfectly penned heartfelt poem. ~mel