Comments : You Have One New Message

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Once again you have written a great poem. The word choice was wonderful and the flow of coures was great. I liked how you wrote about missing someone faraway and couldn't wait to see if that person called. I know how that feels. I gave this poem a 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was good, really it had a few grammer errors, but nothing major, the flow was flawless, and the word choice was excellent, the emtion was heartfelt, and strong, and the message was clear. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww that is sooo sweet and yet the truth from the heart, like when your waiting by the phone for that 1 call from that special person... and it never rings. Is there a store I can buy your books from or is it only over the net, I need to get a credit debit card so I can make online purchases. hmmm, I will look further into that, I love your poetry!.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Aww...this is so's so true too..atleast in my case..
    It was so simple yet i really liked I've penned it so well in such a relateable manner..=)
    Kp writing m'dear.


  • 11 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Wow this is nice, beautiful and alot of people can relate to it. Although my man is not so far away i still get so excited when i have a message from him when i wake up :)
    Well written enjoyable read.
    Keep it up :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite a beautiful poem with a sweet meaning portrayed behind it. I liked the flow it wasnt off at all. The style interesting as always. Your word choice was deep, powerful, strong, and stunning. I found this poem to be capturing coming straight from the heart. Well done on a perfectly penned heartfelt poem. ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    I love your topic. wat a great idea to talk about the message system on this website.

    5/5 david

  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    Awww that's soo sweet goran! i know the feeling, i do the same thing. beautiful poem, it hits the heart yet again.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a contemporary poem with an old sentiment. I love your delightful cultural colloquial wording.

  • 11 years ago

    by elizabeth

    You should write more like this it is really good

  • 11 years ago

    by Startle Me

    That bright my dark room.
    Do you mean
    That [[brights]] my dark room?

    I don't understand this poem.
    It's quite... original.

    I text message and all.
    But it's kind of a waste of text
    If someone just sends you a happy face.

    I don't know.
    Maybe I read it too slow or too quick
    I guess I'm not meant to understand th is.

    love your format.
    I'll give you props on that.

    I read it agian.
    I'm kind of understanding it.
    It's kind of like... a drug?
    A cure?
    That if she doesn't send you a message...
    You won't get away from the sadness.
    Or blah.

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    I'm quite familiar with the feeling of anticipation--
    an anticipation for something to arrive without further ado. And text messages from a particular someone is no exception to the rule. =]

    I really adore this piece. It was so delightful and pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more of your works!

    Take care,

  • 11 years ago

    by mrhope

    This is so true, most of the time i even open my computer with hope of email from her, that is at least what i want to have, when i open it...
    as you said it is just a click.

  • 11 years ago

    by desigirl

    I dont know how is it possible but i have missed 11 poems of yours, are u writing sooner or im slower?lol.
    this was a good poem goran, but unfortunatily not for

  • 11 years ago

    by Alla Patrak

    I think its sooooooo adorable and really really sad dat it makes me cry....!

  • 11 years ago

    by k*k

    Hey this is kk and u have written a great poem and so this is time for me to go!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Excellent poem. :3 (5/5)

  • 11 years ago

    by Joey

    Heyy is this message thing.. do you mean text message? email? or like a game?

  • 11 years ago

    by reyna

    Keep up the writing, your poem was the greatest poem i so far read!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by XxSabrinaxX

    I really like reminds me of my boyfriend and i except we text.