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  • 11 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    A sad, and very emotional poem. You certainly made it appealing and made yourself speak out through the words. Great job and take care.
    cheers, josh

  • 11 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Aw hun really you can't know how sad I became..I wish nothing had become to you...But you know world is full of jerks..all around the world..And he will get what he deserves..Believe me dear
    I'm always with you
    Don't ever forget that
    Your everlasting sis
    Laura

  • 11 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    This poem is very strong and has a lot of emotion in it. I like the stanza scheme you used where you would leave it hanging and then come back with the sentence. The flow was excellent and was carried all the way from the beginning to the end, same with the rhyme. Well done and remember, no one should tell someone else how to run their life and no one should control someone else.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Nick

  • 11 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

    keep it the great writting

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 11 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    WOW... Nessa... thats really deep. I hope that actually didnt happen. If so... I am sorry to hear that it did. And that you get you Revenge... 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lovely poem mate. very into depth.
    i saw a mistake though.
    you typed 'lokked' instead of 'looked'.
    anyway 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very emotional.
    Hope it didn't happened for real.
    Beautiful written.
    Take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so deep and heart breaking.
    it was so emotional.

    you took away inocence...
    something i will never regain
    you tried to hold me...
    with my body twisted in pain

    just loved this stanza.
    best wishes
    and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my, this is so powerful! Great poem with strong imagery.
    This piece hold so much emotions.
    Every line is superbly written.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. i think this should go in the explicit area. and reread it for typos. other than that, good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    This poem was truely amazing. i really dont know what to say, but this was amazing. i love the end. excellent job.
    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 11 years ago

    by shantavia

    Very sad was this ture but its a nice peom