Imagine

by Kyle   Jun 11, 2007


Imagine all the pain slipping away
from the voids in our hearts,
while im holding you close and protecting you
from the dark.

imagine a feeling so powerful
that replaces what was once there,
while in each others eyes we stare.

imagine a faint glow of dawn
meaning the ending of night,
while we hold on tight and watch
the sun rise so bright.

imagine the smiles on our faces as
sunlight touches our skin,
love kills the darkness and all our suffering ends. imagine

this poem is for Steph <3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Aw, this is a really cute poem:)
    I liked it a lot.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by emILY

    Great Poem! Lots of imagination :) Simply Awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    Imagine all the pain slipping away from the voids in our hearts, while im holding you close and protecting you from the dark.

    wow love that first part...hey you should try to split your poem up into stanzas. it will make the flow of the poem better and make it sound alot better. it will also make more ppl read it... great job over all 5/5

    always
    Manda

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    This is an amazing poem.
    Keep up the good work.
    5/5 all the way. :)

    Jadee.:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    Very powerful. i really like the repitition of "imagine"

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