Does this poem have anything to do about mat, especially when u told me the other day that u had taught yourself to hold it in. I love it i felt the same way after Ryan and Rob passed away. Sorry if have got it wrong but that's how it looks to me ok
This is my favourite bit(probally because it relates to me the most):
No, I have learned that I should
Hold my pain in myself and deal
Bite my lip and force myself not to cry
In time, somehow I will heal
I love it. I want you to write more because when i read your poems i am in your world not mine.
Hey david!..i know this is probably an dold poem but ive only just signed in on this site thing...but your poem has so muc depth to it that i wsa i could touch..your powerful words made my stomach tight just wishin i knew how you felt...though i am one of those rape victims i must say your poem is good...
keep it up bree...PS..PLEASE READ ND COMMETN ON MY POEMS REALLY APPRECIATE IT!..CHEERS
You seem very popular when it comes to your peoms and so im sure i have repeating the same points others have made but i want to show my love for this poem and my support for it.
my favourite stanza was:
Cruel and ruthless
Dangerously close to letting go
If only I could say how much I hurt
If only I could make you know...
This poem had such a ferosity and such a burning fire within it. It seems like you testing yourself, testing the devil itself also. I love the contrast bewteen pain, loss and grievance. The poem seemed to be tiring (in a good way), it added to the drama and emotion of it all. It has this slogan attached to it "whats the point of living if you cant feel alive" .... i really enjoyed this, well penned. keep up the great work.