Excellently written piece of work, I enjoyed the poem very much. You had a good flow that was carried from the beginning to the end keeping its durability. You followed the acrostic rules right and showed a strong bond between you and the person you wrote this for. It's nice you wrote this for a friend and doing an acrostic poem was creative. Well done Omar, I hope to see more poems as nicely penned as this piece of work.
You defined a friend very clearly. I especially like the line where you defined them as the first you look for when you're getting married. The word usage was excellent. Thanks for a great read.
This was a sweetly written acrostic poem, For your first you defined this so well. I loved the ryhme scheme. Your definiton of a friend was spot on. Choice of words strong and effective. I enjoyed read this interesting piece of poetry very much. Creative. Well done on writing such a nicely written poem. ~mel
10 years ago
Aww.....this poem is so sweat! I loved it. It was written well and had a great flow to it.
Amazing. Really nice too. I never did one of these in school, but you just got me inspired. Toug i think mine would suck. lol. Great usage of words, and the way it was all arranged reminded me (since you mentioned daffodil) of a beautifully organized bouquet. hm, i like your user name too! Kakashi rocks! still, this poem was incredibly wonderful and truly defined what friendship is. Nice work. :-)