Comments : My Daffodil (Acrostic)

  • 10 years ago

    by unknown

    Aa,bb,cc,dd.
    Great poem, I think.. ^^
    You define a friend clearly...
    I know you value your friendship... ^^
    Keep writing..
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    You have done an excellent job on your first try. I really like this the word choice was simply wamazing the emotions were deep and clear, and the flow was flawless 5/5 although you deserve more

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Excellently written piece of work, I enjoyed the poem very much. You had a good flow that was carried from the beginning to the end keeping its durability. You followed the acrostic rules right and showed a strong bond between you and the person you wrote this for. It's nice you wrote this for a friend and doing an acrostic poem was creative. Well done Omar, I hope to see more poems as nicely penned as this piece of work.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Nick

  • 10 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    I remember making these in english class! lol
    great job
    much better then the one i did for my name.
    its hard when you have a "z" in your name
    ELIZABETH
    i ended up putting "zeus"
    5/5 though

  • 10 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    You defined a friend very clearly. I especially like the line where you defined them as the first you look for when you're getting married. The word usage was excellent. Thanks for a great read.
    cheers, josh

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a sweetly written acrostic poem, For your first you defined this so well. I loved the ryhme scheme. Your definiton of a friend was spot on. Choice of words strong and effective. I enjoyed read this interesting piece of poetry very much. Creative. Well done on writing such a nicely written poem. ~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Patience

    Aww.....this poem is so sweat! I loved it. It was written well and had a great flow to it.

    Cicely

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great write!!!
    keep up the good work.

    seems u r Nartuos fan ;)

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Dear lord someone needs to get a life,,lol just kidding I am laughing alot tho a guy writing a poem called my daffodil, only in amer...err lebanon haha

  • 10 years ago

    by Oracle

    Amazing. Really nice too. I never did one of these in school, but you just got me inspired. Toug i think mine would suck. lol. Great usage of words, and the way it was all arranged reminded me (since you mentioned daffodil) of a beautifully organized bouquet. hm, i like your user name too! Kakashi rocks! still, this poem was incredibly wonderful and truly defined what friendship is. Nice work. :-)