Aa,bb,cc,dd.
Great poem, I think.. ^^
You define a friend clearly...
I know you value your friendship... ^^
Keep writing..
5/5

You have done an excellent job on your first try. I really like this the word choice was simply wamazing the emotions were deep and clear, and the flow was flawless 5/5 although you deserve more

Excellently written piece of work, I enjoyed the poem very much. You had a good flow that was carried from the beginning to the end keeping its durability. You followed the acrostic rules right and showed a strong bond between you and the person you wrote this for. It's nice you wrote this for a friend and doing an acrostic poem was creative. Well done Omar, I hope to see more poems as nicely penned as this piece of work.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Nick

I remember making these in english class! lol
great job
much better then the one i did for my name.
its hard when you have a "z" in your name
ELIZABETH
i ended up putting "zeus"
5/5 though

You defined a friend very clearly. I especially like the line where you defined them as the first you look for when you're getting married. The word usage was excellent. Thanks for a great read.
cheers, josh

This was a sweetly written acrostic poem, For your first you defined this so well. I loved the ryhme scheme. Your definiton of a friend was spot on. Choice of words strong and effective. I enjoyed read this interesting piece of poetry very much. Creative. Well done on writing such a nicely written poem. ~mel

Aww.....this poem is so sweat! I loved it. It was written well and had a great flow to it.

Cicely

Great write!!!
keep up the good work.

seems u r Nartuos fan ;)

God bless u

Dear lord someone needs to get a life,,lol just kidding I am laughing alot tho a guy writing a poem called my daffodil, only in amer...err lebanon haha

Amazing. Really nice too. I never did one of these in school, but you just got me inspired. Toug i think mine would suck. lol. Great usage of words, and the way it was all arranged reminded me (since you mentioned daffodil) of a beautifully organized bouquet. hm, i like your user name too! Kakashi rocks! still, this poem was incredibly wonderful and truly defined what friendship is. Nice work. :-)