-Nothing's built to last
And nothing stays the same,
You can call me a cynic baby,
But that's my middle name.-
^ My favorite lines.
Whole poem is powerful, the wording in it is superb and I like it from the beginning to the end.
You created great atmosphere and imagery through the piece.
This comment is for you entering my very drawn out contest so thank you VERY much for your entry.
Yeah, I totally and completely love this poem! I mean the entire attitude was perfect, and I was listening to Pink in the background so the attitude in your poem even had theme music! Lol! But truly amazing job! Especially about Cynic being your middle name. Perfect! :) 5/5 without a doubt! :)
This poem was actually kinda catchy, haha. I was reading the beginning and even though it was sad I was smiling at how well it flowed together. The poem is touching and sad and it points out flaws on both sides. Kind of gives you both sides of the spectrum. There's a lot between the lines that no one can understand but you, but you havent put them into metaphor form. Just left them for the reader to imagine and make them anything they want to their selves.
This poem was sad, indeed. But it had hints of strength inside of it that I really admire. (who sounds like a groupie now? haha) This was a moving piece and normally I hate the "baby" in a poem, as it is a useless filler to me. But you wrote all of this well and that tied the poem together. You changed my mind on poetry. (: